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Freedom


Freedom is an abstract noun,
a coveted candy to a novice's fancy.

Freedom once sampled, will usher in
responsibility.

No man lives in a shell unless
he closes in the self.

Freedom entails meaningful living
and reasoning.

9 August 2008
— flowing reed, Dec 28, 2009

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flowing reed

16 years 5 months ago

Freedom

I am glad you like my style. Yes, I also feel the poem needs to expand a little to give it a more complete form. Thanks and my best regards to you.