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Dec 27, 2009
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Penetration
I have allowed youDeep inside meUnder my skinPenetrating to my DantienSparking neurons thatChinese whisper to my brainThey tell of your wonder. My heart rejoices My brain relates itTo cultured consciousness My SoulAh, my soul has foundA mirror of desireA source of food to feed itFire and light and growthIt has come face to face with itself The battle of moralityHas begun withinStimulated byThe original sin
— seabhac, Dec 27, 2009
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Critiques
Ink Dragon
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Liz,
seabhac
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks for droppin in Nina
Ink Dragon
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks for the enlightenment, Liz,
chrisbyrne
16 years 5 months ago
I think it was Alfred Hitchcock who said;
seabhac
16 years 5 months ago
Hi Chris
Ink Dragon
16 years 5 months ago
Apparently here
Bonitaj
16 years 5 months ago
WoW Liz!
seabhac
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks Bonita
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
The title got me,lol.
seabhac
16 years 5 months ago
A title is the bait isn't it
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Its all been said before me
seabhac
16 years 5 months ago
ha ha , you always make me laugh
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
remember that old song ? the
Orphani
16 years 5 months ago
Undoubtedly one of your best
Tim
16 years 2 months ago
wow, very sensual and
panaella
16 years 2 months ago
loved this!
Seren
16 years 2 months ago
Just leaving my X I came