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rain

Its like it never goes away
it explains all my fear and pain
do you think it will ever go away?
if it does I wounder what will happen
maybe a rainbow will apper
and all my pain will disapper
Until that beautiful rainbow of love appers
my life is shadowed by pain
and a windowsill covered in rain.

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September Daydreams

16 years 4 months ago

The title was good,but after

The title was good,but after reading your poem,it made me not want to reread.The language is poor and there are some typos.It does not transmit anything to me as a reader.I see that you're talking about pain and rain symbolizes pain,but you should work more on the imagery,rhythm etc.