Sunshine and Rain

Double messages

Many times we get
More than one, news
One is very sad
The one does amuse.
Which one wills you
Do more value
It’s totally upto you

You alone are dumb struck,
When one is in lightening
The other one is love struck.

Life’s ways are queer indeed,
Some live and others die in deed.
So when the next day sun rises
Live in earnest hope
As with many situations
One has alone to cope.

— loved, Dec 27, 2009

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Country/Region: ROU

Critiques

September Daydreams

16 years 5 months ago

Good

Flowed nicely,though the rhyme seemed forced in some lines.Your poem gives a positive message to the reader.Other then that your piece doesn't have any artistical characteristic that makes it outstanding.It's a simple piece.Keep writing!

loved

16 years 5 months ago

thanks

my life is a simple jigsaw puzzle any one can solve it