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Dec 27, 2009
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Arrival
Arrival
No more
the bloom of vibrant youth
colours my cheek,
nor does urgency
flow forth
from limbs
no longer
supple
as once they were.
Yet-
surely
my stride
never streamed with such joy
and anticipation
as it does now
when my legs hurry me to meet you?
Did I ever once listen
so intently
to a lovers' conversation
as I do now
to the timbre of your voice?
I think
it has been through grace
and accidental turnings
that I have learnt you,
and you have become
an unguent for these bones.
Time
has been our friend
and I find we are each
pulled
by the others gravity-
A touch tells me
your skin
is knit like mine
The conversations we have
run through my head,
and all I want to do
is place my hand on your thigh,
and hear you breathe
Then later -
lay with you,
curled
as a palm frond,
within this time
that is ours.
.
No more
the bloom of vibrant youth
colours my cheek,
nor does urgency
flow forth
from limbs
no longer
supple
as once they were.
Yet-
surely
my stride
never streamed with such joy
and anticipation
as it does now
when my legs hurry me to meet you?
Did I ever once listen
so intently
to a lovers' conversation
as I do now
to the timbre of your voice?
I think
it has been through grace
and accidental turnings
that I have learnt you,
and you have become
an unguent for these bones.
Time
has been our friend
and I find we are each
pulled
by the others gravity-
A touch tells me
your skin
is knit like mine
The conversations we have
run through my head,
and all I want to do
is place my hand on your thigh,
and hear you breathe
Then later -
lay with you,
curled
as a palm frond,
within this time
that is ours.
.
— pleiades, Dec 27, 2009
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Critiques
Kailashana
16 years 7 months ago
This is poetry. Sublime.
pleiades
16 years 6 months ago
thank YOU anna…your words
orgami
16 years 6 months ago
awareness
pleiades
16 years 6 months ago
ahhh, o… i lap up your
orgami
16 years 6 months ago
writes and ordinary
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear P
pleiades
16 years 6 months ago
thanks jayne.hope you had a
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