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Angel Of Flesh

you look for me with desire..
you hate & love me.
you want me and are afraid of me..
you want to burn in my fire.
My skin shines bathed with pleasures..
It hides Sweetness & Poison.
My kingdom is pleasure..
I am an Angel Of Flesh...
You called for me.
You ache to feel my breath..
to taste my heat.
Now here i am... as you wished.
But know that when I deliver..
there shall be pain.
Join me. My willing slave...
Cover yourself with a breeze of senses..
My appendages Shall entwine you,
twisting..wrapping around you...
pressing against your skin.
Taste the tongue and the teeth,
Let my moistened lips destroy your will
as I defile your flesh.
Is this as you wished?
I am deceptive to the utmost level.
I hold the secrets
to the darkest ecstasy you will never know.
Let me consume you now..
Look at you throbbing, hungry for more.
Gasping with hesitant Submission.
I laugh as you beg...
My libido unleashed, my carnal desire
shall leave behind a wake of destruction...
You will never experience a greater horror
Than what I will do...
No greater torture than my touch.
I conquer your body...circling you
like a starving wolf toying with its prey.
But you wished for this.
You yearned for this
You wanted this
You begged me in your dreams
to come to you..
And now here i am.
My kingdom IS pleasure..Full of eternal secrets..
There shall be blood,
fountains...
rivers...
Bodily fluids spilling forth.
Your pathetic form can only briefly quench
my eternal lust..
And as I come... you will taste death.
So it shall be, Every night...


*You can't dine with the devil,.. without becoming the meal*
— violet, Dec 27, 2009

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 5 months ago

and you called this UNTITLED!!!

well I never!!! What a dance with diablo this was! Definately not one to sup with! Fantastic imagery! Excellent writing - just please do something about the title! ;) Bonita j ps. How 'bout calling it ULTRAVIOLET? lol
violet

violet

16 years 5 months ago

:)

wow thankyou! :D im stuck with the title.. i have no idea what to name it hehe
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 5 months ago

Dinner...

or welcome to dinner, or after dining pleasures or, kingdom of desire, or desired endings... I think I could go on and on... wonderful poem, there may have been a few spots where there were a couple of redundant words but I declare, I missed them during the read. I thought you could've effectively ended the poem with "here I am"... but, then I liked the ending line you came up with too. very good, loved it, did I say that already!! Richard
violet

violet

16 years 5 months ago

:)

oooh... id love to know the words you mean.?. i appreciate your opinion :)
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 5 months ago

Violet...

ok, on looking back... my appendages shall entwine you twisting... wrapping (around you) pressing against your skin. I think when I read it the first time I left the "around you" out, I often do that when something could be more effective(in my world) without it, but I think I would present it differently as well, so as to give it the power expressed. My appendages shall entwine you twisting wrapping pressing against your skin... merely thoughts on your poem, did I say how good this is already! you begged me in your dreams to come (to you)... same thing, felt it more powerful not spelled out (redundant), but what a great line! in fact this poem is full of great lines, I'll be coming back to read this a few times for sure.
violet

violet

16 years 5 months ago

thankyou!

that is a really great view you have on it... i will go back, have a read through and maybe do some editing ;) thankyou again for your honesty.. i appreciate it! xx
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

How about: When my violet

How about: When my violet eyes turn red...? Brilliant seductive, enchanting, engaging and rotten-to-the-core poem. I love unraveling you, I mean it. The devil made me write that. ;-) ~A Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 5 months ago

The Feast

or pleasures pains or facts on pleasure or sex without you or pleasures curse or violet's revenge or in the end or your pleasures are numbered or freaky friday or weeks end or or or or or or.... so many ways you could go with a title to this piece, but you need one that does it justice, so it probably wouldn't be any of these, I'm sure you can come up with something appropriate... thank you Violet for posting this piece and making my day.
violet

violet

16 years 5 months ago

:)

your words are very kind :) thankyou again x and.. wow! all these ideas for a title!!
C

chrisbyrne

16 years 5 months ago

I really like this, I had to

I really like this, I had to read it 3 times just to let the meaning of it soak into me! The first time I read it Kali the Hindu goddess of distruction came to mind! Im going to go look out your other work now. Chris