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The Spectator

Walking a shadowy distance
Telling the world all is fine
The Green, The Blue
All is fine in the world
The trees stand firm
The sky floats high
The world moves together,
Keep the mind simple
Let the thoughts clear
Drowning the troubles within,
All is fine here
No harm is done
No weakness is reached
Distanced from all
Walking, admiring the world
For all is fine where I stand
— Layune, Dec 25, 2009

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Region, Country: California, United Sates, USA

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September Daydreams

16 years 5 months ago

I loved the title!!!

The title speaks for itself.Your lines are simple,yet meaningful.I like the comparison to the spectator.For some life is passive,so we stand looking at what is done.Colors changing,life changing reassuring ourselves that everything is fine...we move on.I like the last two lines and I can relate.