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Sundog

In North Dakota
four sundogs
appeared

Christ has died
Christ is risen and
Christ will come again.

In each heart
an empty manger
waits.









— Kailashana, Dec 25, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Mum

My god ... how great is this creation that we all take for granted most seconds of most days ... thats all I can say ... Bravooooo hope you and your had a wonderful day and Santa was good to you love youuuuuu from alll Jayne x x x x x x (xmas Kisses) from all Bethany is nearly finished her first poem thats shes writen on her own will message you when she posts in her account unknown quantity
Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

The euphoria of Christmas is

The euphoria of Christmas is so powerful a message of the possible, the intangible, unreal, it carries its crown of thorns and pierces our minds with its red-blooded juices, and drugged on this trip, we swoon and sway like the trees in the stormy nature of life, never really knowing, never really understanding the what and the why if it all. But when we celebrate, we put our minds whole heartedly into the act and rejoice that we have had the ultimate privilege of living at all. Amen. Ann of the northern winds of Winter. A remark when I read this out loud: about someone, " He doesn't believe in God but he's afraid of him"!!!
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

How Beautiful

Wonderful. I felt your last stanza. Well done. Love Lyz. XX