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Class 1A - Poetic Licence (Un-restricted)
He sees himself as nothing else,
He sees himself deflecting.
He knows himself, there’s something else
And still he’s not reflecting.
He tries to blame his thoughts of shame,
On things that he can see.
He’s taking score of every flaw,
Of his analogy.
An alliteration
Of his categoric scopic?
Personification
Of his metaphoric logic?
He searches at his own pace,
Placing to its place
Then thinking how he could replace
The things he has misplaced
(by other hims)
The forgotten things, the just in case.
So careful not to lose his face.
Despite the glaring honesty
He forfeits poetic license
For what?
He asks me when it does not matter,
(Re-ignition of the mindless chatter)
For a moment...
A barked command to play his hand
And violence takes its silence
Don’t fold
As the air grows cold
The noises of the old and told
He remoulds a mouldy, moulded mould
And beholds a hand of scolding gold.
All can see his house is full
Of lighted royalty.
He’s swimming in the Hard to Sea
Of Knowing;
He can be...
Comments
themoonman
16 years 4 months ago
Damo...
Damo
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks for your comment,
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Dear Damo
Damo
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks for the welcome. Nice
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
he he he bit of push back
Damo
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks for the tips - I’ll
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Oh and if you want a few
Damo
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks - there’s heaps for
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
Another strong wordcafter in our midst, and an Aussie too! Cool
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Sorry Jess you can bash me
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
No wuzzas, possum,
Seren
16 years 4 months ago
Bash away I was having
Damo
16 years 4 months ago
I wouldn’t be ‘here’
themoonman
16 years 4 months ago
Aww Crikey...
Kailashana
16 years 4 months ago
Well, what can I say that
Damo
16 years 4 months ago
Thanks Richard - it’s like
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 4 months ago
I love this
R.M.Shanmugam
16 years 4 months ago
nice. i liked the style
Ink Dragon
16 years 4 months ago
Late to the party...