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The moon.

THAT MOON                                                                                                                                      Vicki O'Brien 25th June 08

And once ago the mood did whisper to me,

little girl, hold on tight to life

for it will

toss you into its oceans full of storm

that play without mercy.




and that big pearl moon

smiled a shy pink smile

learn to walk in the cloak of lonely

it whispered

for to enjoy company unneeded is a much sweeter seed to chew,




little girl

that moon whispered in a hush

big orb eyes drinking me in like liquid love

give of yourself

what you want of others,




thrust away hands that grip tight

for those who love true

love you in your freedom

that moon

sighed upon a glinted smile of silver




then that moon

blew a wind of no calm

that tossed an carried me along life's twisted paths

not now a little girl

i give the moons whispers to you

to do with what you will.

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Ravenshakti

Ravenshakti

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Vicki...

I love the whispers of your Moon... They carry a beautiful wisdom, and a warmth that goes straight to the heart. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. Gentle regards, Raven.
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Lunegirl

16 years 4 months ago

Thankyou Raven, It was

Thankyou Raven, It was reading yours that reminded me i had written it! I hope you are well vicki
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ngaioBeck

16 years 4 months ago

Moon

It rattles my cage just the way it is. Nice!
Mark

Mark

16 years 4 months ago

Yes

I like it how it is and I tripped up at "along life twisted paths" I think that would be "along life's twisted paths" By the way with a name like fuckwit how could more folks of good nature not be curious to take a peek into your port lol Truly, Mark "some things change, some things do not"
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Lunegirl

16 years 4 months ago

Oh the name :s up for

Oh the name :s up for renewal, im having attachment issues though lol. You are indeed right about the s in life, I have changed, thanks for pointing that out. Im glad you liked the poem. vicki ; )