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Dec 24, 2009
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A Different Christmas
Got out the Aliens movies on DVD
One, two and three.
Having an unworldly lifeform
implanted in your body
without permission
seemed quite appropriate
to the Christmas story to me.
You may not agree.
But limiting the spread,
of unhealthy theology
might likewise,
save humanity.
— weirdelf, Dec 24, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Brilliant Genius you are
themoonman
16 years 5 months ago
Jess...
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
ta Jayne, Richard,
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Yup Staunch covers a few
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
always glad to provide a chuckle
Jonathan Moore
16 years 5 months ago
Well done
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
thanks, this feels better,
Jonathan Moore
16 years 5 months ago
That'll do
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
I was not worried about offending pagans
childof21
16 years 5 months ago
screwed up. loved it…
Van Owen
16 years 5 months ago
hey
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
thank you mike
jabuu
16 years 5 months ago
a nice twist
ziggy
16 years 5 months ago
hello
seabhac
16 years 5 months ago
Great belly chuckle
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
ta ziggy, seabhac.
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Weirdelf
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
ta Lyz, I actually don't have a view of Christmas
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Naughty boy?
DawningDaytripper
16 years 5 months ago
Hi Jess, Hope the New year
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
Spot on Julie, and thanks for the feedback
Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
All I want to know is how
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
couldn't do it alone, goddess
Candlewitch
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Jess-Elf
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
ta cat
Quillsvein1
16 years 4 months ago
More vital theology
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
The main thing the whole series had going for them was Ripley
Quillsvein1
16 years 4 months ago
The Miraculous
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
you nailed it in a way you might not have expected
infinite_dwarf
16 years 4 months ago
dammitsomuch....
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
my mission and mandate
xena465
16 years 4 months ago
Maybe it'll be Aliens that will save the future of the world
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
but that faster thanlight speed keeps on screwing with me!
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
Christmas is a confused blur
weirdelf
16 years 3 months ago
it's the other way round, whit,
whitetea
16 years 3 months ago
Yep, the pagans did come up
orgami
16 years 3 months ago
Original Alien
pleiades
16 years ago
so, so clever o weird