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magics02
Dec 24, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

ASLEEP ON HIS HAY

Away in a manger, a baby boy lay,pillows of straw, His golden bed of hay The little Baby Jesus was born this night,Stars above shine, forever so bright. We thank God for the Son he bore,For on this night, we've come to adore. It's Christmas Eve, on this silent night,The little Baby Jesus, sleeps so tight We love you Lord Jesus  you are the reason,
To come together this beautiful season.


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Magics02
December 24, 20092:25 am
— magics02, Dec 24, 2009

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Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Magic this is a lvoely

Dear Magic this is a lvoely christmas poem needs a couple of smallish tweaks you have a wonderful sleep and a VERY PEACEFUL and joyful day tomorrow ... love and hugs Jayne x x Away in a manger, the baby boy lay, pillows of straw his golden bed of hay. The little Baby Jesus was born this night, Stars brightly shining, forever so bright. We thank God for the son he bore, For on this night, we’ve come to adore. It’s Christmas Eve, on this silent night, The little Baby Jesus, sleeps so tight.. We love you Lord Jesus, for you are the reason, We all come together to celebrate this season
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Done dear

I tweaked it and it does still sound beautiful and I did this early this morning, sick with flu and all. You have a wonderful day my dearest Seren. Love and Peace Magics02 xoxoxoox
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Thank you my elf

Thank you and you have the best of holidays also dear friend. Love Magics02 xoxoxo
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Your welcome

Thank you so much as it was a beautiful Christmas Eve and day. I hope your was bright also. magics02
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Beautifully written

This is how Christmas began and we all celebrate it in our own way but always with friends and family. Well written and I hope you had a wonderful day and an even better new year. Love to you and yours, Lyz. XX
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

thank you

I hope you had a Merry Christmas also. And a Very Happy New Year to you and yours, love magics02