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A POEM TO MY FARTHER 11-9-31 to 12 -12-09
A POEM TO MY FARTHER
This day when we all come together
Will be , his day and his life will be infinitely celebrated
Because , in each one of us is his memory
And his strength
Tempered by love
A gift of wisdom
He gave to us all.
And yes we can not see , what plans god has for him
This is his solo fight
This is only one charter ending in his life
As we our physically left behind
We will not struggle with unanswered question , to give it character
Because our personal pain is the reasons why
We will not tarnish, his gifts to us
With needs of our own salvation
For this is his day
This last charter of his life will a celebration
Their should be no shame
If time cheated our chances to say
Words of convictions.
Defining , the
love and memories given
Each one of our relationships’
With him was conclusively exclusive
Remembering his voice is our solitude
For a resolution
On this day of celebration
We will stand with pride
And give homage to each hour
Each day he touched our life
Critiques
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dearest Press
press
16 years 5 months ago
JC
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Press …he will ever
magics02
16 years 5 months ago
Sorry