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Dec 23, 2009
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Belying this despised state
you hunch upon shuffling feet,
pondering the crunch of browned leaves.
Burrowing this dusty soil
you hide beneath scurrying paws,
forgetting the crash of billowy waves.
Blowing out raspy breath
you pucker withered lips;
release cotton-downed doves.
Bellowing against the horizon
you herd the flock from grazing;
shackled gates embrace nightfall.
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Belying this despised state
you hunch upon shuffling feet,
pondering the crunch of browned leaves.
Burrowing this dusty soil
you hide beneath scurrying paws,
forgetting the crash of billowy waves.
Blowing out raspy breath
you pucker withered lips;
release cotton-downed doves.
Bellowing against the horizon
you herd the flock from grazing;
shackled gates embrace nightfall.
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— crypticbard, Dec 23, 2009
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Critiques
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
pretty flow of imagery,
Frederick Kesner
16 years 4 months ago
thanks
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
You are not going to help me out here?
Frederick Kesner
16 years 4 months ago
Well, it may mean other things to other people.
weirdelf
16 years 4 months ago
I am so very sorry,
Frederick Kesner
16 years 4 months ago
nothing to worry about