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Dec 21, 2009
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Black Water
Coal River Valley
was the prettiest place
I'd ever been
... twenty years ago
back when the union
still had some of the control
they fought and died for
but...
the miners still dropped
like flies, breathing
the rich black dust
mountain top mining
put the miners out of work
crushed the union
but not the industry
mountain top removal
poisoning the land
company oxymoron
cleaner-greener-coal
greed it seems
is government backed
money generated
through lives lost
spoiling mountain water
and everything below
who would ever think
man could be so fowl
black stone money
for deep pockets of the few
eroding the Appalachians
tomorrow
gone
was the prettiest place
I'd ever been
... twenty years ago
back when the union
still had some of the control
they fought and died for
but...
the miners still dropped
like flies, breathing
the rich black dust
mountain top mining
put the miners out of work
crushed the union
but not the industry
mountain top removal
poisoning the land
company oxymoron
cleaner-greener-coal
greed it seems
is government backed
money generated
through lives lost
spoiling mountain water
and everything below
who would ever think
man could be so fowl
black stone money
for deep pockets of the few
eroding the Appalachians
tomorrow
gone
— themoonman, Dec 21, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
This is one hell of a poem
themoonman
16 years 5 months ago
Jayne...
DawningDaytripper
16 years 5 months ago
I am so touched Moonman.
themoonman
16 years 5 months ago
Hi Julie...
Damo
16 years 5 months ago
The free style here gives
themoonman
16 years 5 months ago
Thanks Damo...
themoonman
16 years 5 months ago
Hi Annie...
themoonman
16 years 5 months ago
Flexed...
Lunegirl
16 years 5 months ago
Its completly an important
themoonman
16 years 5 months ago
Vicki...
deelilah
16 years 5 months ago
Hi Richard
themoonman
16 years 5 months ago
Dee...
rainbow
16 years 5 months ago
Rain. As a coalminers
Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
Cleveland has many activists
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Powerful
Pamela A. Lamppa
16 years 4 months ago
A timely subject dear poet.
Victorclaude
16 years 4 months ago
yup