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Black Water

Coal River Valley
was the prettiest place
I'd ever been
... twenty years ago

back when the union
still had some of the control
they fought and died for
but...
the miners still dropped
like flies, breathing
the rich black dust

mountain top mining
put the miners out of work
crushed the union
but not the industry

mountain top removal
poisoning the land
company oxymoron
cleaner-greener-coal

greed it seems
is government backed
money generated
through lives lost

spoiling mountain water
and everything below
who would ever think
man could be so fowl

black stone money
for deep pockets of the few
eroding the Appalachians
tomorrow
gone
— themoonman, Dec 21, 2009

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Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

This is one hell of a poem

This is one hell of a poem Richard ... I am in awe of your voice ... you speak truths that they would like silenced ... their greed exposed to the world for materialistic ends ... walking over people with no regard ... reminded me of a situation with an Australian company ... they systematically poisoned their work force over many years ,.. and will be paying for it till time ends, the courts finally letting justice be service ... but no amount of money can replace the lost lives or put those people back next to the people they loved ... its was a corporate culling that went on under everyones noses and then when it was too late the truth outted ... Love and much respect Jayne Sorry for my ramble your poems that good :)
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 5 months ago

Jayne...

I thank you for your comment and there is no need to apologize for rambling here... it is appreciated. This poem/prose, I struggled with... trying to get it all down in some coherent but poem-like state, not sure if I accomplished that. West Virgina is (to me) the most beautiful state on the East coast, I've been to all of them, but the coal industry has decimated several areas with mountain top mining, there has been many debates on where and how the waste should be dumped, the army corp of engineers is supposed to be in charge of clean water, but the people in the areas of the mining are forced to buy water, as the water from their wells is black. The debate is all about the money for the industry, mountain top mining is a very productive way of gathering coal, no need for miners, just guys to drive machinery to dig, and set charges... it goes on and on. The coal industry has always been notorious for mistreating its workers, but I suspect the few that they need now are paid well, and those guys are only doing a job... our government allows the removal of mountain tops, there are regulations, they are supposed to reclaim the land, plant trees and grasses and in some cases you can see it has been done, but the waters are contaminated for a long time, and they ultimately run in many places on the east coast... oh, I could go on but I won't. thanks Jayne
DawningDaytripper

DawningDaytripper

16 years 5 months ago

I am so touched Moonman.

I am so touched Moonman. How very reminisent of the "Coal miner's Daughter" Tragic life realty. I loved the poem. I thought it was well thought and executed. The black coal was a destroyer of family's yet the company paid the bills. It is just such a touching sentiment to a time not as far in the past as it could be. There are still survivors. And I thought it a great read. Julie D.D.
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 5 months ago

Hi Julie...

thank you for the read... how are you doing? I hope you and your family have a great holiday time. The coal industry today is much different than back when it actually employed the community, now the people watch as millions of dollars worth of coal rides past their homes with little opportunity of working, the industry just doesn't need very many now... they went from employing approximately 15,000, to 800 today... that to me is a giant difference in opportunity for employment. It is the locals that are suffering the high cost of contaminating natural resources, and they don't even get a job...
D

Damo

16 years 5 months ago

The free style here gives

The free style here gives this one a sombre and authoritative tone - perfect for (what I am assuming is) the purpose of the piece. There is a sad 'isness' to the poem but not so much sadness as to leave me (the reader) feeling dejected. Despite the words, I hear some hope. Really like it.
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks Damo...

I appreciate your look into this poem, I felt I left much out but chose to submit because to me it is an important issue, of course it isn't new to the people affected by it, but it may be a new concept to some. thanks again! Richard
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 5 months ago

Flexed...

I think I like that maneuver, thanks for reading Dale.
L

Lunegirl

16 years 5 months ago

Its completly an important

Its completly an important issue and one that is tuned out by the masses because to regonise would be likr=e to much hard work in changing from a capitilist to a socialist society. Give up all that fake comfort? Oh no no no no no shouts the blacketed subconcious!!! Thanks for sharing your poem. Sometimes this form of political expression is all that works and is a gentel stab at the conciouse. vicki ; )
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 5 months ago

Vicki...

thank you, and you are right too, I feel it is the job of poets, and always has been, to point and tell... thanks for reading
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 5 months ago

Hi Richard

West Virginia is a very beautiful state, one of my favorites, too. The poem is very telling. I didn't realize the people were unemployed because of the reasons you state---I thought it was due to regulations. Greed is government backed. They certainly have not solved anything. I think the fact the people have to buy water is awful, not to speak of the despoiling of the landscape; yet they're out of work. Unspeakable. Yours, Deelilah
themoonman

themoonman

16 years 5 months ago

Dee...

It is a very hot subject in coal mining towns in West Virginia, and has been for the last 10yrs or more... it isn't something that catches a lot of media attention, but it's out there because the people have petitioned the industry and the government about it over and over. In the original case, it was decided the coal co. had crossed regulations and mining was stopped, but since then it was turned over by the state supreme court and regulations have been altered, allowing the industry to dump closer to natural streams which feed the existing wells and waterways of the surrounding communities. It is such an important issue for our Country, I had to write about it. The people there were employed by the coal industry for the last 150yrs or so, but now... they are unneeded with the development of the "new and improved" ways of gathering the coal. This is something that in my mind should not be allowed to continue, it is wrong for the environment, detrimental for the community, and greedy, just damn greedy! thanks for reading, I bet it's hard to handle that rig in those mountains.
R

rainbow

16 years 5 months ago

Rain. As a coalminers

Rain. As a coalminers daughter myself, I have a lifetime of memories here, of disasters and accidental deaths and the final and ultimate blow; the lung disease that took them out in the end, my father was one of them, (Still fighting for compensation thirty yrs on,) That is if the can find his record. They have cleared the mountains of slag and greened up the blight that was an eyesore in every village for countless miles. but we cannot forget, not in my lifetime. Thank you for the poetry of it.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

Cleveland has many activists

Cleveland has many activists re the good bad and ugly of the coal mining industry. I wrote a poem for them once. See if I can find it...something about a canary who gives up her life.... Love, Anna
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Powerful

A committed write and your words portray the enormity of a coal miners life. Very heart wrenching and you have done justice in your words. Write on, my dear Moonman. Lyz. XX
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 4 months ago

A timely subject dear poet.

A timely subject dear poet. It would seem that when the almighty buck is attached, it matters not what it does to the environment and matters even less, what it does to the men working it. Black Lung - not as common these days with strip mining, but still there. All for the love of the fossil fuel ... and sweetly still, the sun shines bright. It is always the poets and the song writers who write on morals and environmental issues, who speak against establishment and yearn for a better world. It is always the poets. Coal River Valley - filled with black water. This is quite well done and I am pleased to have read this today. Thank you. ~Pamela
Victorclaude

Victorclaude

16 years 4 months ago

yup

I lived the Smoky Mountains for a decade and witnessed this nonsense. I wonder when we will stop fucking up that which was given as a gift. Victor Claude