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Sands

Only Sands remain unchanged...

 

Sands of dawn, ocean’s grandeur;

Trapped among the toes with rising tides,

Touching, caressing, soothing the inner self.

As it recedes, washing away secrets.

 

Raised by the sands of dawn,

Castles of new beginnings.

Caged hope’s first free breath,

Restless flight of restless wings.

 

Sands of dusk, shroud of twilight;

In dying afterglow, recognized.

Brutal scavenging of captor’s tools,

Triumphant dance through predator’s hands.

 

Cradled in the sands of dusk,

Layers of thin films of dust.

Allure of free beliefs and thoughts;

Aging foundation of the universe.

 

Sands of time, trials of hourglass;

Ruthless, paradoxical intermingled naivety,

Thousands inhuman, futile capturing,

Only reminiscence of whispers through ages.

 

Buried in the sands of time,

Gnarled roots, dried bones of civilizations,

Ghosts of the fallen empires,

Shadows of the forgotten souls.

 

Sands of secrets, unforgotten truths;

Caged in the inconsistent sand dunes.

At mercy of merciless sandstorms.

Only sands are unharmed.

 

Protected in the sands of secrets,

Ever changing facades of time,

Eternal rush of memoirs.

Only sands remain unchanged. 


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September Daydreams

16 years 4 months ago

Beautiful

I did like the imagery.The repetition of the word "sand" worked well.It's interesting and creative at the same time how imagery graduates from stanza to stanza reaching the final point.
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 4 months ago

I am glad. :)

Thank you so much and I am so glad that you did like it. :) I might confess the idea to use 'sand' came from the computer game series Prince of Persia's trailers. :)
Seren

Seren

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Pragyan

I love playing prince of persia lol love that game and loved this poem ... well done ... :)cannot see anything to fault love and (huggles) Jayne-Chloe
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 4 months ago

Jayne

Thank you for your appreciation and for your time. :) Regards Pragyan
yenti

yenti

16 years 4 months ago

Beautiful

The power and gentleness of such a tiny grain, worded well and runs as the sands of time in the glass timer smoothly and passing the time for all to be together as one, Have a lovely new Year, Yours Ian.T
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 4 months ago

Dear Ian

Thank you for your read and for the wish. My warm wishes to you as well. :) Regards Pragyan
yenti

yenti

16 years 4 months ago

duplicate

Have a better day than I am with this entry LOL
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MeanderS

16 years 3 months ago

hi...

this has got a very extraordinary an' unconventional style...very bold, raw and merciless i must say. somewhere i feel it breaks civilisations' conventional flow of things an' erects itself up again upon the burried bones. see you did it again. ;) have a very good day.
Pragyan

Pragyan

16 years 3 months ago

:)

I heart your appreciation. "Unconventional", never expected that though. But glad that you thought so. Thank you and may the stars watch over you. :)