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Dec 21, 2009
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wondering out loud
If poetry is a tool
then why are we ignominious fools?
When we reach orgasm
do we ever turn back?
Is there a place for poets to go
where the destination is a marked card we play
and the distance of memory meets
with blind inculcation, binding each to the other?
There is field where Rumi dances with words and we
learn to write in his Holy Braille,
touching one another deep enough to
expose our own vulnerability.
Give me Grace, give me a night filled with stars,
give me penance to do,
I love you too much to send this poem to you.
We are water birds, drowning with emptiness.
Crying out loud like the loon against the moonlight.
then why are we ignominious fools?
When we reach orgasm
do we ever turn back?
Is there a place for poets to go
where the destination is a marked card we play
and the distance of memory meets
with blind inculcation, binding each to the other?
There is field where Rumi dances with words and we
learn to write in his Holy Braille,
touching one another deep enough to
expose our own vulnerability.
Give me Grace, give me a night filled with stars,
give me penance to do,
I love you too much to send this poem to you.
We are water birds, drowning with emptiness.
Crying out loud like the loon against the moonlight.
— Kailashana, Dec 21, 2009
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Critiques
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dearest Mum
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
I just dance and scream like a loon
Damo
16 years 5 months ago
You love too much to send -
Dalton
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Kailashana
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 5 months ago
Two soar with the eagals and one is a turkey most noble and true
Barbara Writes
16 years 5 months ago
Anna
Orphani
16 years 5 months ago
a lot of questions here my
Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
Thank you all for reading.
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
you know everytime you
seabhac
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Anna
lyz
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Girl