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wondering out loud

If poetry is a tool
then why are we ignominious fools?
When we reach orgasm
do we ever turn back?

Is there a place for poets to go
where the destination is a marked card we play
and the distance of memory meets
with blind inculcation, binding each to the other?

There is field where Rumi dances with words and we
learn to write in his Holy Braille,
touching one another deep enough to
expose our own vulnerability.

Give me Grace, give me a night filled with stars,
give me penance to do,
I love you too much to send this poem to you.
We are water birds, drowning with emptiness.

Crying out loud like the loon against the moonlight.







— Kailashana, Dec 21, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dearest Mum

Magnificent ... I read your heart to the trees they swayed enthralled first lines of my new poem, thought you might like a peek love and hugs Jayne
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Damo

16 years 5 months ago

You love too much to send -

You love too much to send - I hope you sent it anyway!! And I love the way that line expresses love. I love love. :-)
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Dalton

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Kailashana

Dear Kailashana very zen you must be very proud with this one. It begins in the ordinary world and drifts off into space and takes me with it. You have the gift of turning mere words into something that glitters like starlight. Love JohnX
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 5 months ago

Anna

This is a great piece Poetry is a tool. I like that line especially. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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Orphani

16 years 5 months ago

a lot of questions here my

a lot of questions here my love. I will say this to answer the poetic question posed.Sorrow is a well, which from its depths of want, one can know the value of fulfillment, and the joy of attainment, and I promise not to use the words mumbo jumbo. Barry ...o..
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

you know everytime you

you know everytime you mention Rumi ... I yearn to read i have only found what you guys have submitted here and they are just wonderful ... going to find some more in the next couple of weeks to take away with me ... love you mum congrates on spotlight lol thats what I can to do and rambled about Rumi love and hugs from ALLLLL they are sitting round getting over their stomachs lol
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Anna

Poetry is indeed a tool and the skilful use of carving words into towers of wonder is in my opinion one you have in great abundance. My favourite lines are There is field where Rumi dances with words and we learn to write in his Holy Braille, touching one another deep enough to expose our own vulnerability The thought expressed that touching others is a way to know ourselves, poetry being not just a gift to others but too the core of you also is delightful. Our'heaven' is what we make it and yes anything is possible Seabhac
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Girl

What can I say. All before have said it. Just a heartfelt write that is very well written and expressive. You are very poetic and always write from the heart with love. Lyz. XX