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Ode to Ted Plantose


Twas ebon night, mid silver sheen,
the moon and I did stroll .
‘Tis said ‘ the night is made of dreams, “
and she, from lovers souls.

Moonbeams caressed each loving heart,
then kissed each loved one's cheek.
So suddenly did they depart ,
the sun he stole a peek.

I bade the moon a fond “adieu” ;
a tear fell from my eye,
to be captured as a sunbeam
pirouettes on a sigh.

The sunbeams danced upon my brow,
then twinkled in my eye.
So soon the moon seemed just a dream,
the sun took hold the sky.

Twas golden morn, mid emerald dew,
Sol and I returning.
'Tis said “the day is made of truth” ;
He, from Gods love burning.

There I beheld a vision fair,
that filled my heart with pride.
The sun and moon together there,
and in their midst stood I.

All aglow, from my head to toe,
cloaked in silver and gold.
Whilst all the sun and moon beams danced,
with me till till I grew old.

When it came time to lay me down
unto eternal sleep .
Moonbeams caressed my loving heart,
and kissed my wrinkled cheek .

By Jove !


— jove, Dec 20, 2009

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Region, Country: British Columbia, CAN

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16 years 4 months ago

Hey JoveFirst of all - glad

Hey Jove First of all - glad to see another Canadian!!!! I'm from the west coast myself, in Alberta right now. This poem really is quite beautiful, the imagery is pretty powerful and stunning, the moon and summer nights are among some of my favourite images. Great write, Jove, hope to see more. Peace.
jove

jove

16 years 4 months ago

Thank you very much

I was kinda hoping someone would comment on this . I thought it was going to slip off the page into cyberspace never to be heard of again ! lol Glad you like,it I sure do! Um, I am a wee bit bias though ! Tee he ! I am a published poet here in the great white North, and a member of the Canadian League of Poets . I am also a computer artist and draw my poetry as well. I call the pairing Poartistry and have been doing so since the early 90s. My latest book of Poartistry, is called "JoeyPoey's PoetrySmoetry" for children. Published by The KooKy-KunuK Productions Co Richmond Bc Canada. ! For The Poet's Tree House and Copy Center.It's due out this spring. There is just a FreE-Book right now. ! 10 pages with covers, as a gift / pre-order peek. I just bought a E-Book compiler, Do it yourself advertising . lol This poem has a matching graphic I drew for it, as do a few hundred more and counting. Well met fellow Canuk . I have a daughter there in Calgary . By Jove