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microscopic gaze

What wonderment in the minuscule
where life dwells beyond ridicule
through time heaped on
reason within the fibers
of structured season .

Peel away a layer expose the flesh
of seed or fruit  self replication
it`s destination , hidden in
size from prying eyes

tiny imprints of a delicate balance.

DNA , where ninety nine per cent 
does not complete us yet still
we share a similar looking
fetus.

A microscopic modern wonderland
maze.

— ziggy, Dec 20, 2009

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ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

hello

hi there i love all things nature and science its great to get such a quick comment , the book you mention sounds interesting , there is a line or two here i tought might stir some remarks thanks for the comment and all , happy xmas ,,,,,,,,,,,,,ziggy
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 5 months ago

I like this a lot Ziggy

A world within our world existing out of view 'beyond ridicule'. I love the concept of that. Very eloquently written Seabhac
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ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

hi there

hi sorry i thought i had replyed to this comment i`m glad you like the idea in this one it was one of those that kind of write them selfs when it gets started , thanks for the comment happy xmas ,,,,,,,,,enda
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ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

hello there again , yes

hello there again , yes indeed your right many thanks for the reply i hope you have the xmas your hoping for chat soon ,,,,ziggy
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

worlds within worlds within

worlds within worlds within worlds and it goes on ... wonderful work Ziggy I loved it love and hugs Jayne Merry Christmas :)
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ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

hi there jayne

yes worlds within in worlds thanks again for the kind comments if your chating to lyz tell her i said hi and tell her look out for the postie he must be late , hope you have an xmas to top them all chat soon ,,,,,,,,,,enda
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Awesome

You have grown in the small time of my absence and I think you are branching out strongly. Well done my dear. An awesome write. And once again, thank you. Didnt you get your message? Any ways, the postie came late Xmas eve. Just on time. Lol. Love to all and chat very soon. Love Lyz. Keep up with the great poems. XX