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A Shadow of a Whisper Concerning Envy

The Book of Whispers shares it's heart
and mind on this one sin,
every time it rears it's ugly head
a green-eyed beast is born within.

Coveting is a finer way
of referring to this ghoul,
dealing with it's a different thing
and not a thing taught in school.

Begrudging someone's lot in life
or wishing it had happened to you's not nice,
but the other side of Envy is, Jealousy
it's a double whammy that'll zap you, twice !

Envy versus jealousy
there are two sides to all coins,
and when either one saturates your spirit
you feel it all the way down to your loins.

There's nothing good that can come from
a green-eyed spirit, or soul...
it's a defect of personal character
and on everyone it takes it's toll.

It eats at you from the inside out
resulting in a hollowed out heart,
one's best bet would be to steer very clear
and not allow envy or jealousy to even start.
— docmaverick, Dec 19, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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W.C.Wampler

16 years 5 months ago

Envy...poem...comment

Doc., I write poems like this when I'm trying to help myself. It IS how I help myself, and if it works for me, I might pass it on to anyone who will read it. If it helps them, then my duty as a learning person is fulfilled. Is yours helping? Or are you just writing an observation? Either way, I like it. wcw
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 5 months ago

Oh yes....

...it very much DOES help ! But, this is just my continuence of my writings on the seven deadly sins. Thanks for the encouragement ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.
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Antoinette Mar…

16 years 5 months ago

Excellent doc.....

I look and wait anxiously for the rest to read....