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Donate your lovely eyes
Lovely eyes
Your eyes are a beauty so very lovely
The gift of sight I want from you only.
As you look into my eyes
A wave of emotion does in me arise.
How I become so very eager,
To have you in full view
Wow, wow, can you ever review
How much I honestly love to see you.
Your eyes give me a shine,
In this world
I’d like them to be only mine.
Hope someone you will some day
With your lovely eyes also play
But ere I go the world shall know
Those eyes they belonged to me.
Donate your eyes ere it’s too late;
Many aspirants are waiting at your gate.
Someone will love to see through these
They will forever bless you
As you they so wonderfully please.
Some later day do remember the blind
My lovely eyes someone will also find.
When of them we have really no need
Below the earth we will lie cold indeed.
Your eyes are for me
Mine are only yours
As long as we live but hopefully
Then someone else for these will long
Ours to us then no more shall belong.
Critiques
Barbara Writes
16 years 5 months ago
Doners
loved
16 years 5 months ago
thanks