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The Great Escape

They all seem to want more and more of you
When I'm crying out to take a piece of me
Why can't they fall for anybody else
Can't seem to hide my sickening jealousy

I'll pretend that you only have eyes for me
Though this seems to be getting more tough
The look of resignation on my face these days
Does this tell you I've finally had enough

You'll miss me, as no one loves you quite like me
And all the flattery from others is so fake
So this time will you listen to what I have to say
Or at least pretend to, just for my sake

I am so fucking adorable when I am needy
Was something that someone had once said
I would rather be known as needy than greedy
But then I'd rather have you with me in my bed

I am planning what with my very limited I.Q
What will be known as the greatest of escapes
Then you will realise what you could have had
And all those compliments were not mistakes

I may bow out, this could be my swansong
But then again you'll have to wait and see
Whatever happens you know how I honestly feel
But I ask now, please don't be waiting for me.
— Millage, Dec 18, 2009

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Benjamin1987

Benjamin1987

16 years 5 months ago

I like this a lot

Millage very good piece. I like how the title matches up with what your message is. I also like the angst of it all. I also think that the beginning and the end are pretty good. I like how you have how everyone wants this person and yet you want her more. Then the end you are essentially telling her that she is missing out on a great thing. Great job and I hope see more pieces like this. -Ben
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Millage

16 years 5 months ago

I thank you....

Ben, that is very kind of you to, not only read it, but to compliment me like that. Sincerest thanks Much love Millage x