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Dec 18, 2009
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Whispers of Doubt
The hardbound Book of Whispers
entertains a thought
about the seven, dreaded deadly sins;
it's similiar, indeed
to measuring the world,
on the total of the frowns, versus the grins.
Chapters equal both the sides
perusing each and every topic,
that has helped in making up each hardbound book,
the problem isn't with your eyes
so for you to understand,
The Book of Whispers merely suggests you take a look.
In no given order
whisper shadows will discern,
between both the sides of any given topic;
there's a negative and positive
to each and every sin,
not addressing them, would quite frankly be...miopic.
The first thing we'll discuss here
are the two distinct, dark sides,
of the deadly sin that's known to all, as "doubt";
there's no "safe-harbor" here
no matter what side you are on,
the doubted, and the doubter are both, "out".
The bond that comes from trust
is seriously, "breached";
all readers will attest that this is, true;
for, what's hidden in the balance
there's no one to predict,
if you doubt someone, then be sure their doubting...you.
entertains a thought
about the seven, dreaded deadly sins;
it's similiar, indeed
to measuring the world,
on the total of the frowns, versus the grins.
Chapters equal both the sides
perusing each and every topic,
that has helped in making up each hardbound book,
the problem isn't with your eyes
so for you to understand,
The Book of Whispers merely suggests you take a look.
In no given order
whisper shadows will discern,
between both the sides of any given topic;
there's a negative and positive
to each and every sin,
not addressing them, would quite frankly be...miopic.
The first thing we'll discuss here
are the two distinct, dark sides,
of the deadly sin that's known to all, as "doubt";
there's no "safe-harbor" here
no matter what side you are on,
the doubted, and the doubter are both, "out".
The bond that comes from trust
is seriously, "breached";
all readers will attest that this is, true;
for, what's hidden in the balance
there's no one to predict,
if you doubt someone, then be sure their doubting...you.
— docmaverick, Dec 18, 2009
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Mrs Dalloway
16 years 5 months ago
Certainly a controversial
docmaverick
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Mrs. Dalloway....
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dearest Doc
Kailashana
16 years 5 months ago
The flick “Seven”