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KISSING AINT NO SIN

Kissing is no Sin

That is the only sin

If it’s a sin

I love

But some how my spouse

Denies it to me

It’s my yellow teeth,

Gums or simply imagination

Or fascination

Perhaps they’d enjoyed

A kiss with someone else

When the spouse was young

I make so much noise

Oh I’d enjoy

Love a kiss

— loved, Dec 17, 2009

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loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

thanks

glad to kiss but the Lord deprives me of this a kiss just a simple kiss
kowque

kowque

16 years 5 months ago

kiss him in your prayers...

the Lord never deprives, for he too kisses the skies and makes us mortals dare to leave our souls bare and snatch a few kisses for ourselves... ;)
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

thank the LORD

THANKS a great deal for the kisses ur words give to my eyes and ears as u i read may the lord rest by your kissing side bride/groom bsides A UNIQUE POEM IN ADVANCE FOR U English is a wavering language As it was snowing today And I lay in bed whiling my time away Some thoughts crossed my mind What errors in the English language Did I find None except that Its language is wavering Here it’s now worth sharing... Bent is bent Then we have Cent, dent, Skip f Then we have a gent H and j, also k kick away Maybe we can accept lent Ment, oh sorry it doesn’t fit in. Skip n, Skip o Pent is ok, q Is totally out Rent will do Sent too, tent well ok, U is out Vent is in, Went, o yeah X and y and z We can’t fit in any where Getting back to ment Just amend to read it as ‘meant’. Hope the remaining homework You surely will do.
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

glad for you

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