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The Boy

 

O joy! O joy! A boy is born upon this day
The father, quiet in exaltation,
now filled with expectation,
lays a geas none may sway.
His fate is set.

This boy shall grow strong of limb and mind,
he shall build great things upon the earth
and from his fertile mind give birth,
to riches,
leaving poverty behind.

The boy just gurgles.

And grows into a happy child,
surrounded by loves glow
he's sheltered from life's harm
gets his way with cheerful charm,
but his eyes burn strangely wild.

This world was never enough for him,
he found friends no-one else could see,
he flew and fought, explored and sought
beyond this world of rock and thought
in galaxies bright and grim.

Father concerned,
what does he see?
Where does he go?
Vanishing increasingly,
and not quite returned.

Something happened.

Quiet and alone, distrusting
the boy sees the world anew
all that was bright now askew
he hides himself from all but few.

Now a camera,
just seeing,
feeling naught
learns new lessons
don't be seen
don't get caught.
But its tiring.

And the devils came marching in great explosions of colour and bitter fragments everywhere his prancing form cavorted tween rocks and oases in a burning sea glowing wand waved to people and page and film never lingering long up his arm and nose down throat and lungs a black-hole widening gluttonous neath and behind drawing closer ever running old man's geas now cursed blocking satisfaction to him and all at every turn and leap he fell and foundered leaped again wand waning thin broken patched aeons endless sliding sinking gaining losing till in roaring blackness he he sank into the black sea of ignominy all his worlds receding

oh, so quiet,
glancing up he sees hands,
bare, gloved, gauntletted,
not grasping threatening
but offering help, love, care lifting
he reached back
and found his worlds grown quiet
no devils or blackholes
not crowded or alone

a strange tingling in his fingertips.


 

— weirdelf, Dec 17, 2009

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Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

Oh, Joy, o joy, Weirdelf’s

Oh, Joy, o joy, Weirdelf's back. I had to look up the definition of geas (it has 2 ss's) ~ a mysterious ability which certain people can bestow on others. Is that the correct context/interpretation? Happy birthday Jess and thank you for taking us through you journey, the one we all take, more or less. Love. ~A
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

ta Anna, In Irish mythology

ta Anna, In Irish mythology and folklore, a geis, geas, geass is an idiosyncratic obligation or prohibition, similar to being under a vow or spell. Often forcing a person into an insolvable conflict with their own beliefs. Opposing geasa lead to conflicts of Greek tragedic proportion. And it is a joy to be back, in more ways than one. In some ways I have never been "here" before. Cheers, Jess, whose nature is irrepressible
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

I love you Jess. The second

I love you Jess. The second birth is of epic consequence, is of our own undertaking in universal hands. Eh? ~Anna Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

including near death experiences,

shamanic death and major epiphanies I guess this would be about my fifth birth, I lose count. I love you too. Cheers, Jess, whose nature is irrepressible
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

Ah, my red-headed step-child

Ah, my red-headed step-child (are u red?) the 2nd birth is into the shamanic journey which you so eloquently spoke of in your poem/video... For me, it is the watershed experience. There are countless deaths and rebirths along the way. One might be tempted to speak of infinity. ;-) Cheerios is not the breakfast of champions, eating the poisoned apple is. (How's that for the beginning of my new poem?) Love. ~a Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

Red as a commie

and red-headed in the sense of redheads in Tom Robbins "Still Life With Woodpecker" [greedily gobbles poisoned apples and forbidden fruit] Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Jess-Elf

I read this once, then went away to read another poem. I couldn't get this poem off my mind, very troubling to me. How sad and terrible it was for someone, a parent, to put his own burden of desires and aspirations on this poor child. A heavy cloud. Love, Cat
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

Don't they all?

Or most, to some extent. Usually disguised as "We only want what's best for you" Cheers, Jess, whose nature is irrepressible
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Jess

I found this really hard to read for personal reasons as I am sure you understand ... so well written I am speachless love and biggest hugs Jayne x x
yenti

yenti

16 years 5 months ago

Strange Small Person

It is really great to have you here again and now we have seen a part of your journey that we missed. One of the great things is that the path you were on has become the same as ours again:- oh, so quiet, glancing up he sees hands, bare, gloved, gauntletted, not grasping threatening but offering help, love, care lifting he reached back and found his worlds grown quiet no devils or blackholes not crowded or alone a strange tingling in his fingertips. They were there all the time it takes love of yourself to be able to see those hands there, this love is greater than any other as it can be shared by all, there are many loves around but only that one can be shared by all. Anyway it is good to have you back I hope that we will also have the strict comments you gave sometimes LOL You take care of you and yours, Yors Ian.T
Race_9togo

Race_9togo

16 years 5 months ago

Jess

I found this piece uplifting, the obligation and expectation increasingly at odds with individuality and uniqueness until the crescendo towards the end washes away the inner conflict with calm and lucid peace beyond, on the brighter side. Geass is the right word, so many fathers place such upon their sons, through expectation and through the sting of contemptuous ridicule and dislike. Autobiographical? I related strongly; been there, done that. Also has a spiritual aspect that I like. Respectfully Jim "Laws and rules don't kill freedom: narrow-minded intolerance does" : Race
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

Glad you found something in it for yourself.

It was a difficult piece to write and post because I didn't want it to be a personal whinge, I wanted it to be affective and it seems to have pressed a few buttons. But also because, of course, it could never be a complete picture and the editing for poetic value was quite excruciating. A great many factors led me to that dark place and I barely cover 2 here, hinting at a third. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
AA

adjei agyei-baah

16 years 5 months ago

You leave me with nothing to

You leave me with nothing to say.I have drawn a lot of lessons from it as I journey my way up as a young man.You clearly spell out some of the things that cripple us on path to greatness.This is piece meant to humble the carefrees.Matured write!
L

Lunegirl

16 years 5 months ago

A vivid and interesting

A vivid and interesting read. The way you write has me wanting to know the mind behind the pen ; ) Im analising again and intrigued to know the inspiration or experiences to write this peice. vicki
L

lyz

16 years 5 months ago

You are an amazing writer

Sad and hard to shift from the mind. I did enjoy the read, and the content is strong. Loved it. Lyz. XX
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

thanks lyz

"You are an amazing writer" wow, thankyou. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
L

Lonnie

16 years 5 months ago

Awesomely written, my friend!

Full of inner-truths and a lot of soul-searching! Not always easy to 'Go against the grain' so to speak! Great poem!
Pamela A. Lamppa

Pamela A. Lamppa

16 years 5 months ago

Oh so well done with the birth - and rebirth.

Glad I peeked in on comments regarding "geas." A new word for me. *smile* "but his eyes burn strangely wild." - I love that line to describe what may have been in the Christ Child ... How he must have struggled for understanding in his youth. I found your mixture of poetic prose and poetry simply delightful and completely creative. I am experimenting with poetic prose and find it fascinating - expands my field of vision. Now, I am going to try my hand at incorporating both in verse. Thank you for this. Truly a moving and enjoyable piece to read, digest and hold dear. Oh so well done with the birth - and rebirth. ~Pamela
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point.of.redemption

16 years 5 months ago

that just swept me off

that just swept me off reality and through a beautiful journey! i don't know what else to say! just.. wow
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

thank you pamela and point

We all need to learn that once a work is given into the world we no longer own it. It belongs to the reader. And it is delightful to see it expand in the readers perception beyond what one thought one wrote. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible