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Her Essential Parts (Updated):

Your breasts are not clusters of olives
Your name is not the twinless night
You are not the moon viridian  of
Virgin mother skies
You are not the ocean lapping at fervent
Shores
You are not wet with pious want for an
Absent Beloved
You are not a garden enclosed
You are no howri gazelle playful wide-eyed
You are not the dark rank clay
You are not the ziggurat misty mountain pique
Of universal cosmic knowledge
Behind a door of purity your heart the organ
Of His entrance into the world
These gifts offered and not stolen...

Two black olives
Her eyes
Her nipples
Twin clusters of rubies
Hair of ashes
Mingled with the black earth
Hands in the palm
Twin basins of marble
Or the pool where a gazelle bends
To quench her thirst
Where the houri bathe
A garden in shadows
Beneath her mantle
An oasis from which my lips are sated
Thighs pillars of alabaster
Feet as knotted wood
We parted and sighed
And kissed goodbye...


















— Dalton, Dec 16, 2009

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Country/Region: The Celestial River

Favorite Poets: Shane MacGowan, Dylan Thomas, Qays ibn Al-Mulawwah, Wallada bint al-Mustakfi, Rumi, Khalil Gibran, Yona Wallach, Arthur Rimbaud, Paul Eluard, Brendan Behan, James Clarence Mangan, William Blake, Tom Waits, Charles Bukowski, Forough Farrokhzad, Thomas Chatterton

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Lonnie

16 years 5 months ago

Good Title, great poem!

Bold and teasingly-tactile for the tongue! Nicely put-together with vibrant imagery, and robust language!
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 5 months ago

Her Esential Parts

What Lonnie said and a whole lot more! Now that we know what she isn't, what is she? Always, Cat
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Dalton

16 years 5 months ago

I agree

It's more than a little indecisive. I suppose you have to fill in the gaps yourself. I only posted this one because I had nothing else to do with it. Thankyou for reading it, love John.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 1 month ago

Maybe you need glasses,

Maybe you need glasses, John. ;-) A woman is somewhere between your ideals of a goddess and the goddess she always already imagines herself to be. Love, Anna "Your task is not to seek for love, but merely to seek and find all the barriers within yourself that you have built against it." ~ A Course In Miracles
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panaella

16 years 1 month ago

HI Dalton

This poem reminds me of Shakespears' 'Sonnet 130'...check it out...about writing about a lover not as a 'goddess' but as a real woman... Clever imagery. Ells x