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It's Okay.....I Know Him

Enter the apothecary
stream-lined, self-made man;
where he doesn't know the answers
but, he's doing the best he can.

Since the age of his consent
he's always tried to do what's "good",
but, it's lost in the translation
that's why he's so misunderstood.

But, his heart is not in question
it's his motive that's suspect;
he really ought to try and plan more
and skip those dark hours of regret.

He's the guy that's always "skidded by"
I'm sure, to his relief;
and while trying to do his best to help
he ends up causing more grief !

Always right there in the "mix"
putting his two cents worth, in;
but, considering in retrospect
one just can't help but grin.

He's harmless while he agitates
but finally, in the end...
the "good" outweighs all of the "bad"
and he wears the label....."friend".
— docmaverick, Dec 16, 2009

About This Poem

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Lonnie

16 years 5 months ago

Truthful and dynamic!

What a great read! This poem has explicit meaning, brilliant thoughts, and is an absolute joy to recite aloud! Wonderful job!
AW

Antoinette Mar…

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Doc....This fits a few....of mine...

but you gotta love them....and all the meaning and brilliant thoughts that you express are correct...I agree wonderful write...keep them rolling!!
docmaverick

docmaverick

16 years 5 months ago

Yeah Antoinette....

...it DOES resemble quite a few of mine, too ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.