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Unblock The Wall

The word blocked appeared upon my wall
Was that a message to me so tall?
We wrote our viewpoints and that is so,
For forgiveness and opinions we let it show

Just how sad is it, for not to accept
Forgiveness and kindness, I tried to intercept
I only bring understanding and friendship to you
That is all I ever intended to do.

Shall you so read this little old poem,  hope you know
Forgiveness and friendship is the road I always go.
It is your choice and for this I respect,For it is Christmas time, no time for regrets.

You blocked the words of many a soulFor scornful disagreeing it surely gets old
I wonder how a person can hold such a feelingtand

For you still block my thoughts, my words, my song
Why must it be so hard to get along
Some folks are quick to forgive
Some others can not find in their hearts to live

I only come to peach make with you
only if you could honestly see through
The blocked walls, and all the pains
Would it not be nice to be speaking again

No need for remorse or babbling along
we're all just here trying to sing our songForgive one another before it's too late
For the body will soon falter and break
 
The poison of grudge too harmful to soul
Remember this for life gets too old
Time is of essence and so shall it be
Just wanted you to know I am only being me.
— magics02, Dec 16, 2009

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Silent_Rain

16 years 5 months ago

Good one Magic!!

Nice poem Magic, it is kinda sad, makes you wonder who you are talking about. Happiness can some times be hard to find, we all have times of truble and it is friends like you that help to bring them back out of there blue mood and help them find there happy agian. Great poem!! ~Rain~
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

thank you my rain

Aw that was so nice and yes we can not stop others from feeling that way towards us so we just go forth and go on. I am never one to hold a grudge for nothing, t only festers in your heart and soul and you really do not hold peace inside... I prefer peace over trouble or negativity.. See you in chat magics02momma
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Magic

I really liked the theme but with the rhyme scheme abandoned it lost its flow if you would like some help dont hesitate to ask I am short on time at the moment ... but will help in anyway i can ...take care its the beginning of a good poem once you straighten out the kinks and thats what we are here for eh ? kind regards love Jayne
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

thank you seren

Yes feel free to exbound please..off to bed tired out today.. thanks friend love magics02