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Dec 16, 2009
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Unblock The Wall
The word blocked appeared upon my wall
Was that a message to me so tall?
We wrote our viewpoints and that is so,
For forgiveness and opinions we let it show
Just how sad is it, for not to accept
Forgiveness and kindness, I tried to intercept
I only bring understanding and friendship to you
That is all I ever intended to do.
Shall you so read this little old poem, hope you know
Forgiveness and friendship is the road I always go.
It is your choice and for this I respect,For it is Christmas time, no time for regrets.
You blocked the words of many a soulFor scornful disagreeing it surely gets old
I wonder how a person can hold such a feelingtand
For you still block my thoughts, my words, my song
Why must it be so hard to get along
Some folks are quick to forgive
Some others can not find in their hearts to live
I only come to peach make with you
only if you could honestly see through
The blocked walls, and all the pains
Would it not be nice to be speaking again
No need for remorse or babbling along
we're all just here trying to sing our songForgive one another before it's too late
For the body will soon falter and break
The poison of grudge too harmful to soul
Remember this for life gets too old
Time is of essence and so shall it be
Just wanted you to know I am only being me.
Was that a message to me so tall?
We wrote our viewpoints and that is so,
For forgiveness and opinions we let it show
Just how sad is it, for not to accept
Forgiveness and kindness, I tried to intercept
I only bring understanding and friendship to you
That is all I ever intended to do.
Shall you so read this little old poem, hope you know
Forgiveness and friendship is the road I always go.
It is your choice and for this I respect,For it is Christmas time, no time for regrets.
You blocked the words of many a soulFor scornful disagreeing it surely gets old
I wonder how a person can hold such a feelingtand
For you still block my thoughts, my words, my song
Why must it be so hard to get along
Some folks are quick to forgive
Some others can not find in their hearts to live
I only come to peach make with you
only if you could honestly see through
The blocked walls, and all the pains
Would it not be nice to be speaking again
No need for remorse or babbling along
we're all just here trying to sing our songForgive one another before it's too late
For the body will soon falter and break
The poison of grudge too harmful to soul
Remember this for life gets too old
Time is of essence and so shall it be
Just wanted you to know I am only being me.
— magics02, Dec 16, 2009
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Silent_Rain
16 years 5 months ago
Good one Magic!!
magics02
16 years 5 months ago
thank you my rain
Seren
16 years 5 months ago
Dear Magic
magics02
16 years 5 months ago
thank you seren