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I Bless the Morning

With gladness
she folded up her sweet soul,
packed it neatly
for the homeward journey;
but she left too soon,
like winter’s twilight—
silver throated song to Heaven’s choir joined.

Grateful to kneel in her company,
exalt each night in faith and trust
and bowed head,
I remember my mother,
the angel who sings for angels.

I bless the morning
that spreads the curtains in gentle light,
where breezes bearing good news
ruffle pages for a new day
and rainbow promises
color my lonely skies—
my mother, her God,
from whence cometh my strength.

One day she will reach down
with extended hand
and I will board Jacob’s ladder
as easily as a cruise ship.

— deelilah, Dec 14, 2009

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About the Author

Region, Country: Northwest USA, USA

Favorite Poets: E.E. Cummings, Robert W. Service, Emily Dickenson

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Deelilah

You know my sons name is Jacob ... I am speachless at your poems beauty ... well done my friend ...and your mother would be looking down proud (huggles) love and hugs Jayne x x
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Jayne

Thank you for your kind response. I am glad to have done something memorable for your son and my mother. My mother had the voice of an angel; and if they have choirs in Heaven, which I am sure they do, she is probably leading the choir, a thing which she did so well here. She had three daughters, and none of us can sing a note. I do envision a day such as I describe, something like 'Jacob's dream, with angels ascending and descending. Always, Deelilah
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Lovely

I hust have to say this poem was absolutely wonderful. The imagery the words melted my heart. Great job Magics02
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Magic

Sorry I didn't get back here sooner---been stuck in snow storms. Thank you so much for the kind words. Looking forward to visiting with you again. Yours, Deelilah
Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 5 months ago

Hello

This beautiful tribute to your Mother made me cry, I hate to cry, it makes me feel like I've lost control. But I love your poem, especially these lines: I bless the morning that spreads the curtains in gentle light, where breezes bearing good news ruffle pages for a new day and rainbow promises color my lonely skies— my mother, her God, from whence cometh my strength. Always, Cat
deelilah

deelilah

16 years 5 months ago

Hi There Cat

Now, I didn't mean to go and make you cry. But that does tell me something good about my poem. I started with the title this time---and this is where it took me. The lines you picked are my favorites too. As I mentioned, been stuck in snow storms (and Christmas, which we spent stuck in a snow storm in ND). Winter is so bloody hard. I hope your doing well. Talk to you soon. Always, Deelilah