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Barbara Writes
Barbara Writes
Dec 14, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Ship Docked

The Ship Docked

Finals are over
Sore eyes
Tired bod
Stiff neck

No assignments
No deadlines
Anxiety attacks
Ended

Pending final grades
I know I passed
Online classes
Was the bomb

Yea, silly
School was fun
A’s are great and
I’m done

— Barbara Writes, Dec 14, 2009

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Barbara

I feel relief in this poem its nearly palpable, congrates in advance for the A's ... hope you have a wonderful holiday season ... take one big breathe in ... big smile and congrates again love and hugs Jayne
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks Jayne

Thanks for reading and commenting. Your responses are always appreciate I look forward to them. Based on all my assignment and test grades over the pass 10 weeks B's for sure. Maybe not all A's as some teachers don't give A's or I may be a point or two shy of an A. It has happen before. Either way I stay positive always shooting for A's. I had fun writing this so I can test the new server speed. It was awesome in comparison. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

A pass is a pass in anyones

A pass is a pass in anyones books ... and you should be proud ... and how good is this server I am loving it ... I call it the shiznit lol haha love and hugs JayC x x
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 5 months ago

shiznit

Unknown word to me. what's it meaning. Obviously related to speed I'm sure. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Its a word used here I will

Its a word used here I will find the definition and repost for you but anything thats Shiznit is gooooooood lol love and hugs Jayne x x
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks Jayne

That would be nice. a very interesting word ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

CONGRATULATIONS

Wonderful, well done Barb. Proud of you and what a lovely write, I share your happiness. Mwah, well done. Love Lyz. XX
Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks Lyz

glad you liked. It was fun to write as I am so relieved classes are over. ~~~~~~~~~ Be whoever you are At all times, and Remember that Because of this, people will Always Respect, and Admire you ©2008Leonard Respectfully Yours, Barbara