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Kailashana
Kailashana
Dec 14, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Meditation asks "What more can I say?"

I love you.

You say, "If you love me my heart is fully healed."
I ask. "Who broke your heart in the first place."

Waiting for your answer,
my hair had turned to silver.


— Kailashana, Dec 14, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Mum

What more can I say indeed ... waiting ever waiting arent we for something ... and sometimes it never comes love you Jayne
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

Dear sweet Annie, you just

Dear sweet Annie, you just inspired a poem. I'll probably post it tomorrow. Thanks, Love. ~A Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 5 months ago

O Annie, who gave you any

O Annie, who gave you any ideas that you were only good for *something*? I'd say you were good. Period. Don't get your hopes up about the poem though. lol Hugs, Anna Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.