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KISSES SEX and LOVE

 

 

My pet subjects are

Love, Sex, Kiss

As I claim to be a specialist

I still do not know,

What love is?

Do you know?

 

You may perhaps

Read all my

Kiss and love poems

To make an anthology

Then perhaps you can take

Some more time

To learn about

Love and kisses

Then you needn't ask me

As its been a long time

Since any one read thee

— loved, Dec 13, 2009

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Country/Region: ROU

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weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

I found this poem at the end of the "lonely poems" list

I think you know why. You said it right here. Everyone is a specialist on on love, sex and kisses, and everyone is equally ignorant. But I suspect there is a cultural thing happening here too. In western society kisses are truly significant mostly only for teenagers. Love and sex remain inexplicable to all. So as much as I enjoy the freshness of your poetry, from my cultural perspective it feels a bit naive. I hope I don't hurt your feelings. I enjoy your works that I have read, but perhaps you could extend your range in subject matter. You have a joyous command of words and I would be immeasurably happy to see your work more appreciated. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

thanks once again one more similar vein thogh

Take me in your arms Take me in your arms And hold me tight Give me your warmth That’s right I shall give myself to you Then as you want to do With me do, please do As we warmly approach The ecstatic moment Caress me, Caress me, Caress me, Within those few seconds Arrest me Do as you wish Do After all I ‘m meant Only for you
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 4 months ago

oh my oh my,

ok, I surrender, Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible
loved

loved

16 years 4 months ago

THANKS

U WIN PLEASE DO READ SOME MORE THANKS