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SANDS Of Time

 SANDS OF TIME

 

If you could perhaps

Give your doses in smaller ones

Many would digest your intelligence

No pun intended  

 

To me life is just a mirage

On the sands of time

Once I used to say all about

Those sands

The castles in the air

All long talk

On a long walk,

All those were mirages too

As you know that marriages

These days are not so true.

 

Life is a mirage

The nearer you go

The more you want to know.

 

So be aware,

The sands of time

Are like there was nothingness

No Time

— loved, Dec 12, 2009

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Bonitaj

Bonitaj

16 years 5 months ago

THis is splendid!

tained with cynicism - but only for those who cannot see beyond the obvious connection with the mysterious! Nice writing! Bonita j
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

THANKS

THIS ONE U MAY LIKE TOO My pet subjects are Love, Sex, Kiss As I claim to be a specialist I still do not know, What love is? Do you know? You may perhaps Read all my Kiss and love poems To make an anthology Then perhaps you can take Some more time To learn about Love and kisses Then you needn't ask me As its been a long time Since any one read thee
Ladderwords

Ladderwords

16 years 1 month ago

Very nice! I find myself

Very nice! I find myself asking if it is possible to focus the mirage, as I believe them to be hazy images, to see something in the nothingness?
Seren

Seren

16 years 1 month ago

Dear Loved

I dont know that Marriage fits in ,.. i get the reference but felt that another reference to time would tie the poem up a little better as it sits its a brilliant write ... but the marriage threw me off ... maybe the marriage of time in the mirage ... its your poem and your words just a suggestion love and hugs JayCee ("Quote:- Death is the great adventure beside which moon landings and space trips pale into insignificance. Addison Joseph")
loved

loved

16 years 1 month ago

thanks

shall reconsider well appreciated comments