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Dec 12, 2009
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SANDS Of Time
SANDS OF TIME
If you could perhaps
Give your doses in smaller ones
Many would digest your intelligence
No pun intended
To me life is just a mirage
On the sands of time
Once I used to say all about
Those sands
The castles in the air
All long talk
On a long walk,
All those were mirages too
As you know that marriages
These days are not so true.
Life is a mirage
The nearer you go
The more you want to know.
So be aware,
The sands of time
Are like there was nothingness
No Time
— loved, Dec 12, 2009
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Bonitaj
16 years 5 months ago
THis is splendid!
loved
16 years 5 months ago
THANKS
Ladderwords
16 years 1 month ago
Very nice! I find myself
loved
16 years 1 month ago
thanks
Seren
16 years 1 month ago
Dear Loved
loved
16 years 1 month ago
thanks