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the man made perfect

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Every woman is perfect
every woman a breathe divine
every woman is individual
let each one uniquely shine.

The man that wakes up
and embraces this splendid truth
will have gained the world
and find himself perfect too.




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— crypticbard, Dec 11, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

hello

What a beautiful sentiment! My favorite lines are: The man that wakes up and embraces this splendid truth will have gained the world and find himself perfect too. Very well expressed! Always, Cat