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Radiant Snare

He holds the dragon’s gift

in fingered palms

and snuffs out the light

of midnights eye.

 

The manic iris provides

a myriad of colored warmth

and the coldest shades.

 

His thoughts float round me

like shape shifters in plain sight

and cloud the judgment

of his harsh glow.

 

The thickness of caps and ends

like polar opposites

yet always perfectly placed.

 

He covers my body with his liquid love

nourishing even the smallest

streams of hope;

of dreams.

 

 The wisdom held so tightly

roots itself into the core of me;

feeding off my desire.

 

He is still life for the cowardly;

motionless and fragile.

He is my day; my alien planet

and I just wanna go home.

— theladyblue, Dec 10, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Emarie

You might not know but I got some ideas ... but will leave it at that lol ... beautifully written as per and I cannot see anything to fault well done ... love and hugs Jayne x x
theladyblue

theladyblue

16 years 6 months ago

well you know...

its funny how I tend to write things that are so mulit-purposed that even I read it and am like wow...what the hell is she talkin bout LOL... one hint...it wasnt intended to be religious in anyway...except maybe the few 'hallelujah' moments he has provided...:D <3 Emarie ________________________________________________________________________________ "i read you and see…that between the pen, paper and you…there is little room for me…" ~ heart breaker~ Go Live & Get Rewarded!!! Check us out at http://www.neopoet.com/forum/20761 & the Community Calender!!!
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

Nice to see a poem from you

Nice to see a poem from you again Emarie. Nothing is religulous, however, least of all anything that begets a Halleluyah! smile. ~A Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.
weirdelf

weirdelf

16 years 5 months ago

She came from Planet Clare

No-one comes from there. Sorry, couldn't resist. Actually it speaks quite clearly to similar places in me to where it may have come from in you. Cheers, Jess, whose nature is irrepressible
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orgami

16 years 4 months ago

Time injunction-+

oh there it is the fire that roars the spark that magneto livens like hooves on dry cobblestone where have I been but to there and back gathering fire for the kindling purposes of desire try to track in new meadows and sit with the leathercoated carnivores that don their beauty and sit in sculpted purpose machine my envy is bleeding away mass as I lose pounds and sit in glimmerglow of this artifice keeper how it stretchs this time drawing in the stellar edge and words like fresh reason sluice hot meaning you are amazing~
Electric Blue

Electric Blue

16 years 4 months ago

Radiant Snare

Emarie I read this a few times and found stanza 3 5 7 jump out at me feeling akin in emotion drawn. Intriged by your works and the inspiration. Always Electric blue
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orgami

16 years 4 months ago

reading again

i miss your poetry so I just re read what is here finding always something to keep my mind turning so Im always thinking about you