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Dec 10, 2009
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Radiant Snare
He holds the dragon’s gift
in fingered palms
and snuffs out the light
of midnights eye.
The manic iris provides
a myriad of colored warmth
and the coldest shades.
His thoughts float round me
like shape shifters in plain sight
and cloud the judgment
of his harsh glow.
The thickness of caps and ends
like polar opposites
yet always perfectly placed.
He covers my body with his liquid love
nourishing even the smallest
streams of hope;
of dreams.
The wisdom held so tightly
roots itself into the core of me;
feeding off my desire.
He is still life for the cowardly;
motionless and fragile.
He is my day; my alien planet
and I just wanna go home.
— theladyblue, Dec 10, 2009
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Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Emarie
theladyblue
16 years 6 months ago
well you know...
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Nice to see a poem from you
Ink Dragon
16 years 6 months ago
Ah, these moments where we do not know...
weirdelf
16 years 5 months ago
She came from Planet Clare
orgami
16 years 4 months ago
Time injunction-+
Electric Blue
16 years 4 months ago
Radiant Snare
orgami
16 years 4 months ago
reading again