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Lively streets
Lively streets…..
Old London streets are dank and musty
But who can live with or without
Most saloons are noise, girls lusty
Would make rudeness pontificate and pout
Carnal knowledge with a street map
To live in central call taxi for lovers
Tired dogs lie and sniff the cat flap
Wisdom is dreams of itchy linen covers
Does this man bride deserve grooming
Not known at artful dodgers pub
Poor husband is presently assuming
Left there with the scalpels temptress
Slicing is his suffering from inside
Conman and model now play wicked game
Diversity sings best when nightly star
She always leaves a scent behind
A path or perhaps a stepping that’s far
Risk taker likes to cut best meat
Any trail shall be always, his to trek
Snarls loudly as sounding bolder
Clever feet will wander what the heck
Inviting is her skins bareness, kneed
Wet voice trembles sense leaves this night
Never two came together so is the wanting
Small scar on shoulder from others gotten
As rippers shadow fades others still haunting
Not much is shown for nights acquaintance
Throws of the blouse sweat stains stench
Her man he sneers at such small offering
How would he find new tardy wench
Falls onto bed and memory does kindle
Could her thoughts ever be as silly lass
Always is her first act to swindle
His smell was to differ her acts alas
Lies there and man he takes his want
Swept back in time to perfect pairing
Hags hatred stares and now feels affront
Only perfection left is their uncaring….
Critiques
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Lively Streets...
Roscoe Lane
16 years 4 months ago
Thank you