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Dec 10, 2009
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Becca's Eyes
I wake up and find
that a few aches and pains
have followed me into the new day
a stiff joint, an odd discomfort
from origins unknown
I try to connect the malady
with, perhaps, the foolish exertion
from the day before
that may have birthed it
Still, I am grateful
for the parts of my body - entities really
that give me no trouble this day
thankful that they allow me to be here
to kiss you again at the first morning light
and find the blue smile in Becca’s young eyes
— Michael Anthony, Dec 10, 2009
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Bonitaj
16 years 5 months ago
Michael Anthony!
Michael Anthony
16 years 5 months ago
Much better!