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loved
loved
Dec 09, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Mum's Love

A  mothers love

Is so beautiful

None can ever compare

A mum’s love with another

 

Moms will sacrifice all for you

Only if you knew

What mothers could do

We all love and compare love

With sex

We forget a mom’s love

and
Have no regret

 

A kiss given by a mother

No one can compare

Yet we remember

Our lover’s first kiss

We forget

How did our mums
kisses didn't spare.

 

This is an irony of life

I can't get over ever,

Mums are born to live forever,

Even when they leave us

For another world

Moms leave us never

Mums love is for ever

 

 

 

 

 

— loved, Dec 09, 2009

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magics02

16 years 6 months ago

Love this poem

This is a wonderful poem written by you. I share these same feelings as Mothers are Mothers and no one greater then HER..... Great write, I really enjoyed it!! magics02
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

thanks

i am grateful to u for your kindness i'd like to read urs but i dont yet know my way about here i have written only 1750 poems this year heres one My pet subjects are Love, Sex, Kiss As I claim to be a specialist I still do not know, What love is? Do you know? You may perhaps Read all my Kiss and love poems To make an anthology Then perhaps you can take Some more time To learn about Love and kisses Then you needn't ask me As its been a long time Since any one read thee
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

It is great

I loved this poem about Moms It was excellent I thougth. keep it up great stuff. magics02
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

my thanks

thanks a lot for loving moms moms are the world's most invaluable possession
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magics02

16 years 5 months ago

Exactly Right

Loved No words speak louder than those. Mom's are special and it is sad that some do not have the love from their children or vice versa. For me I am a mother of one son who I adore very much even if he has his teen tantrums LOL and as far as my mother her story is incredible and I thank God she is still with us today. magics02
loved

loved

16 years 5 months ago

thanks

thanks for the read kiss ur son he'll remember u Kissing is no Sin That is the only sin If it’s a sin I love But some how my spouse Denies it to me It’s my yellow teeth, Gums or simply imagination Or fascination Perhaps they’d enjoyed A kiss with someone else When the spouse was young I make so much noise Oh I’d enjoy Love a kiss