Kailashana

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Greensleeves for Lady Jayne

her flaxen hair is plaited
with songs of burnished gold
she wears
greensleeves
and dances in the meadow

— Kailashana, Dec 09, 2009

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Worldwide Freeride

16 years 6 months ago

She's gonna love it!

Is she a dandilion, is she a buttercup? You give the spring vereve into this poem with such great harmonics and descriptives and have us frolicking in a harvest time pasture in an instant! Jayne will love this I am sure! Jolly good show! Dale :)

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Mum

Thank you (huggles) and Dale is right I love it ... Love you Jayne x x x x

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

Dearest Lady Jayne, I have

Dearest Lady Jayne, I have ever loved the melody of *Greensleeves* even though the worlds elicit another story, it is beauty--a stylish *romanesca*. That is my image of you in a poem and music. Please let that be an image of yourself in your heart that you hold rather than the interpretation in your thoughts in your dark hours. All my love, Mum Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Mum

I shall hold this image ever close to my heart ... you know whats funny I love greensleeves as well ,your scary sometimes lol (huggles) and love Jayne x x x

hippiepoet69

16 years 6 months ago

dittos

CyberSpace

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Anna

shes all that and more, beautiful I can see her like that love Snake xoxoxo

faerybeki

16 years 6 months ago

Anna, just found this in

Anna, just found this in spotlight and can't not comment, such a short sweet little thing but boy it is heavy and layered with meaning and emotion. May she always dance, hair flowing, in the meadow :) Love to you Anna and hugs Beki xxx

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

I am pleased this poem has

I am pleased this poem has *spotlight* honours... proves my point about how we grow poets here... Love to All, Anna Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart.

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

Dear Jayne and Anna

Dear Anna and Jayne, We are inspired to write for each other when we have such inspirators among us aren't we everyone? And when her aura moves the corn and grasses sway they know she's there as inspiration there to show the human way blue eyes reflecting skies We all love you both, Ann

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Ann thats just beautiful …

Ann thats just beautiful ... I am silent in wonder .. thank you for that and you know we all love and adore you ... love and biggest hugs Jayne x x

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

OH wouldn't it be lovely to meet,

OH wouldn't it be lovely to meet, all of us from all the sides/surface places, of this Gaia, bringing with us the beauty of our abodes like boquets of flowers in our minds to shower on each other and embrace with beautiful multicoloured words our unanimous feelings of joy that we exist, and that we can paint pictures in the mind, those that celebrate our being alive. WWHHOOOPPEEEE LOve, yes love to you allllllll Little Ann like an ant on the hills of life. Thank you, thank you for being here for me too.

Nordic cloud

16 years 5 months ago

Anna dearest sister

This reminded me of Eastern things and made me want to write and answering verse and hoped that that might inspire others to add theirs a kind of joint poem for Jayne? I wasn't trying to compete or change your in any way at all, but you know what I mean; we have done that elsewhere haven't we? Love as aye Annskie bird