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crypticbard
crypticbard
Dec 09, 2009 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Lulach

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Lulach Mac Gill, may your name
be remembered still
another thousand years -
Freedom's memory fill.

Let clansmens voice
'round the globe arise
Breathe in peace you bought
dear for Moray and Alba's skies.

Law, equality and tolerance
the weak protect
Protectors of these ideals
allow us to elect.

Wield again with deftness
your claidheamh mòr
Speak truth, walk in grace
Be no one's fool forever more.




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— crypticbard, Dec 09, 2009

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Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

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Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Bard

I really liked this one ... needs a couple of tweaks flow wise but other than that I liked it very much ... Lulach MacGill, may your name be remembered still another thousand years - Freedom’s memory fill. I got caught on this stanza got stalled in a couple of places ... Lulach Macgill, your name is remembered still another thousand years- freedoms memory is filled just a suggestion but take what you want or could use the rest can be dumped lol kind regards love Jayne