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A phoenix raised

  Curled nakedIn your frameYour 70 years of wrinkled growthEnfolding my sleek skinSafely enclosed withinOur laughter and love of ancient past I remembered our torrid loveYou had tiredOf lifes monotonyHungry to be desired I,Emerging, unfolding my loves experience.We were fire and flamesEngulfed in one another.From the ashesEmerged a woman,Singed Charging headlongInto the world of wife, mother, career.My fires dampened in worn out loveSmouldering inwards. By the magnitude of motherhoodI was lost to itI was lost to meTime passed, I met anotherHurting as I wasReaching for something forgotten We sojourned on parallel pathsReawakening a sense of wonderRoutes divergedWe could not travel Now you are The sediment of youthful sentimentNoble and purist thoughtI desire only the warmthOf your friendshipYour understanding Of the eternal flame of loveA phoenix raised
— seabhac, Dec 09, 2009

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seabhac

seabhac

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks Kal

Yes indeed crazy times. Thanks for dropping in...loved your latest poem. Seabhac
Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Seabhac

Bravo ... is all needs said this time Liz ... beautifilly written I enjoyed the read thank you ... love and hugs Jayne x x
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks Jayne

Love your avitar...is this the youth of the new you, full firey dragon lady? Thanks for the kind words and hugs Wishing you well Seabhac
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hi liz

this makes a good read my fav line is "we so journed on parallel paths" glad i caught this one ,,,,ziggy