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CRIPPLING LOVE

 CRIPPLING LOVE Your affection is not in doubtI see it written all over your faceOf all the good people, you chose meWhat can I say, but to thank you? In return I give the best I canYou led me into your troubled soulThe shaman sets to restore hopeAnd wiped away your silent tears Since we met, nothing seems to workPeople call you all sorts of namesAnd query everything you do and sayI see their points, but I give a blind eye You have made huge sacrificesTo keep the association goingYou monitor my every moveTo be sure none competes with you I have learnt from you, many thingsEven the art of querulous jealousyAlong with spasmodic bursts of angerAnd these I do not like at all Listening to the songs in the talesAs I walk through the labyrinthOf unfulfilled pledges and promisesThese cripple my ability and strength Most disturbing, in all these thingsI ask myself for umpteenth timesThis empire, built with packs of cardsWill it stand, when the wind blows?


— t. reflexion, Dec 08, 2009

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Country/Region: NGA

Favorite Poets: Inspired by an article in an old manuscript , It reads:, AXIOMS OF PERFECTION, In the physical order – In the realization of the dream of beauty, In the moral order – In the realization of the dream of love, In the intellectual order – In the realization of dream of poetry, In the spiritual order – In the realization of the dream of the mystics

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Tony Udo

16 years 6 months ago

Crippling Love

The Path to the summit is often thwarted by the debris of good intent. Poignant write.
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years 6 months ago

Appreciation

Thank you for the comments and for finding time to read, best wishes. T.
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lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Well written

4th poem of love, I have read today, and you have a beautiful poem here, even though the doubts and questioning rings loud. I enjoyed reading it,and hopefully those cards will never fall, unless you want them too. All the best. Well done. Lyz XX
t. reflexion

t. reflexion

16 years 5 months ago

Thanks

This type of love is full of emotional outbursts and highly contentious. I watched it with keen interest. The good news is that it seems to be working for them now after the turbulence. Thank you for the comments. T.