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An Unchartered Course

The sun won't shine
the moon won't glow
without you by my side,

patient lips
that seem to know
where my heart likes to hide.

Tender mercies
close to the vest
are cards we'd like to see,

they show us at
our very best
setting weary hearts so free.

Now, who's to blame ?
Who's not at fault ?
When push comes down to shove,

we make our way
proving our own salt
as we boldly fall in love.

There's much to learn
about the world
that lives behind your eyes,

a vision quest
spies a love unfurled
as we try on hope, for size.
— docmaverick, Dec 08, 2009

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Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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docmaverick

16 years 4 months ago

Thanx, Antoinette....

...I'm seeing "stars"! You obviously, are a very well-read individual...indeed! I sincerely appreciate it, when you take the time out to comment. You just can't know how important your words, are to me ! "Write on"! sincerely, #{:-{)}8==== docmaverick.