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That Door
That door, your blockade
There your enforcement was made
It symbolizes what you're love for me is
Now done and gone!
That something here, has gone so terribly wrong
True friendship petrified, true love was it a Lie?
Something has come between us
You and I
A true love that could have never die
It has grown cold and old before my very weary eyes
My dear heart why?
Try to remember the summer rains
Or at least forget and forgive these pains
The stomping of these grapes, which in time would have became our wine
This wrath that you carry, is it worth all this worry or are these pigs truly swine?
Your loneliness? Your emptiness, are you fine?
Eight years have since past, why does this hurt inside of us last?
This itching for our loss and the time lost, it has caused such an imposition
What is it that we are missing? Is it just an indecision?
These hinges upon this door, should have rusted shut!
But,yet still they squeak, will we not seek?
They freely swing time and time again
These planks within, they have even thicken
A door made from solid ice, and silent lips
Our Love simply dismissed
Walking by these planks; they have finalized the sinking
of
This sailor and his ship
by
Sinbad the Sailor Man
Critiques
themoonman
16 years 6 months ago
Sinbad...
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 6 months ago
Hey I'll take what I can get
themoonman
16 years 6 months ago
Sinbad...
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 6 months ago
Ah but the ones that you pry open
Sinbadthesailorman
16 years 2 months ago
Didn't get it done yesterday I may still have too tweak it some