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Dec 07, 2009
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TOO MUCH
Surplus seeps like winethrough a calabashdripping as though beads of sweat, spilt like the guts of martyrs -overflowing from too much... Excess:things,people,places....we subsume thingsthey consume us. Satietyis no longer surfeit -there's always the gaping mouth- urchined lips curled,pulsating in the underwater sea bed of vacuity always wanting more, more and still more... BjR December 7 '09
— Bonitaj, Dec 07, 2009
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Bonitaj
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks Kal!