ziggy

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— ziggy, Dec 07, 2009

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Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

Hi Ziggy

Ziggy, I really like the thought of this poem! Especially the repeated line of: "Thoughts exchanged there after!" It is a very thoughtful poem, full of hearty emotion and good cheer. My favorite lines are: fresh impressions ushered on to a abstruse complexion , silence broken by a scale of remembrance thoughts exchanged there after . In this line: open arms a joy full embrace (the word should be joyful.) en laced in hefty laughter (the word should be enlaced) I know the spell checker here marks it as wrong, but the dictionary gives it as enlaced. I hope that you are having a pleasant Christmas/ Yule time. This Saturday I am getting together with friends and we are baking Christmas cookies! Yours, always, Cat p.s. Don't feel too bad about not having many readers for these two poems, as it is that time of year where everyone is busy and preoccupied with Christmas/Yule. It seems they have only time to post their poems, but not enough time to comment on other's poems.

ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hi there cat

o thanks your comments mean the world to me yes this spell checker here does sometimes make me doubt my original thought as i always think i am wrong , lol i will correct now , glad you like it as i sort of do to, yes folk are busy no harm ahhhh christmas cookies mmmmmmm ah warm cookies yummy lol, chat soon take it easy and thank you ,,,,,,,,,x ..............zigs

Candlewitch

16 years 6 months ago

update to five stars

update to five stars ;) Always, Cat

ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

lol

ah thank you cat that made me smile cheers ,,,ziggy , happy now ``````

seabhac

16 years 5 months ago

Hi Ziggy

I like the change of style of this one; it seems a little different to what I have read of yours. There is a wistful cynicism I seem to pick up from this in the reading that yes we see the joy the anticipation, the crac and stories shared but it is almost as if it is happening and the acknowledgement of the repeated line is that somehow all those promised revisits may never quite happen. A good read by the way and if I was nit picking the line a abstruse complexion , Should read ( an ) Best Wishes Seabhac Solstice comming soon...Happy celebration

ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

hello

hello there how are things , thanks for the comment this is just about a chance meeting with an old friend and the memories and thoughts it curns up or can and how it can bring you back to good times had , thanks again typo fixed ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ziggy

Seren

16 years 5 months ago

Different write for you

Different write for you Ziggy but I liked it immensely ... faint excuses drift, tales prance from tip of tongue received with grins and quarts of laughter thoughts exchanged there after . My favourite lines ... and I love the fact your stretching yourself ... stepping out of your comfort zone :) love and hugs Jayne

ziggy

16 years 5 months ago

hi jayne

hi there , you just picked out my fav lines this is a bit different for me , i have being reading a bit of W,B YEATS ,,,,,,,THANKS ,,,,zigs

lyz

16 years 5 months ago

Dear zig

What a deep write. Well written and I enjoyed the read immensely. Yes, I too think it reads with a different stroke to your norm, but hey, it is great. Well done. Love Lyz. XX

ziggy

16 years 5 months ago