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Spellbound (A beautiful night)

A beautiful nightWe'll sit and watch the sun go downWith no one else aroundWe're aloneA beautiful nightMay I top your glass up for youGlad we bought a picnic tooTurn off the phone Now this night is spellbindingI can't believe you've chosen meEmotionally overcome, I'm findingAnd it's obvious to see A beautiful nightCan I put my arm around youThat star has your name its trueIt's from meA beautiful nightWe watch my cigarette glowShall we stay until tomorrowCan we please? Now this night is spellbindingI can't believe you've chosen meIf I could just keep rewindingIt would never end you'll see A beautiful nightHoney are you feeling coldTake my jacket and let me holdYou so tightA beautiful nightfeel the alcohol through our veinsAnd the excitement I can't explainAbout tonight Now this night was spellbindingI don't believe you've chosen me    Now realities remindingIt never happened you see.
— Millage, Dec 07, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear M

Your naughty I nearly cried at the end of this one ... its beautifully sad ... but dreams do come true you have to 'believe' ;) love and hugs Jayne x x
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

Thank you

You really are lovely JC. Thank you for you kindness and 5 stars (one of them named after 'her' I hope!) Much love Millage x
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

I’m giving you 5 stars,

I'm giving you 5 stars, not that you deserve them... I was so happy and then.......... You're naughty all right. And quit smoking! Love, Anna Ok. I'm adopting you too. "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
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Millage

16 years 6 months ago

Come on Annabubs....

.....me being the bastard son of the Melancholic, you can't expect too may happy endings surely hun? Thank you for the 5 stars and for taking the time to read it once more. Adoption papers in the post? Much love Millage x