Trapped

it really took me in. and i think writing down the feeling of not being able to get away means you got away. :) thanks for sharing!

hi , mmm heart felt words which speak of how love can drag a person down ,cheers ,,,,,,,,,,,,,zigy

and congrats on spot ,,,,,,,,,,ziggy

Dear Elizabeth, I found this line to be a little weak: "You are poison for real," but I don't have any suggestions for a rewrite. The rest was good. I can relate. Always, Cat

Candlewitch mentions a line above, if i may be so bold. try. Your no good for me The poison that's real As long as your near I won't ever heal I hope i have not over stepped my mark. I think you really have something, Roscoe.

I have missed reading your writes, I am trying to catch up with all but I will be a long while. Nevermind. I am so sad to read this one, you who brings magic and smiles to the table then to have this trapped feeling. I hope all is well and you are ok. You put it into words wonderfully. Please take care. Love and wishes, Lyz. XX

The elicit heart, You talk of a heart you say I hold, yet in me you find a heart so cold Was I the lecherous maker of promise, who’s word you’d take, for life like this Was I a wizard with devotion like spell, playing your feelings as to know you well Did you not see my hearts forbidden, feelings deep and now, so very well hidden For I to know of this hurt you store, I to have dreams, a past, a life before That I would take your love, as and when I chose Create mystique that kept, my heart from blows Always in your green eyes I’d see reflections of a life, not meant for me Two peoples hearts and minds so fond an eloquence of love, soon to bond That I would now share with you another night, and with our passion, we two so willingly ignite Entwined in body hunger, tender is the touch, both captured in moments, we crave so much Each now sated and holding desire we’d sleep, words have been spoken we will not keep Ghosts of our past and truly forlorn is my fear, that I would love you, still I can not let you near I will not stay even though, I am both in love and enthralled, with my lady and, her eyes of emerald Do not play with my heart, Roscoe….

The elicit heart, You talk of a heart you say I hold, yet in me you find a heart so cold Was I the lecherous maker of promise, who’s word you’d take, for life like this Was I a wizard with devotion like spell, playing your feelings as to know you well Did you not see my hearts forbidden, feelings deep and now, so very well hidden For I to know of this hurt you store, I to have dreams, a past, a life before That I would take your love, as and when I chose Create mystique that kept, my heart from blows Always in your green eyes I’d see reflections of a life, not meant for me Two peoples hearts and minds so fond an eloquence of love, soon to bond That I would now share with you another night, and with our passion, we two so willingly ignite Entwined in body hunger, tender is the touch, both captured in moments, we crave so much Each now sated and holding desire we’d sleep, words have been spoken we will not keep Ghosts of our past and truly forlorn is my fear, that I would love you, still I can not let you near I will not stay even though, I am with love enthralled, with my lady and, her eyes of emerald Do not play with my heart, Roscoe….

Forgive me i seem to have posted twice, and would not know how to correct. Sorry Roscoe...