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Donatella

   Today I sat in vaulted churchQuaint and countrified in its rural wayWinter light teased wanlyThrough coloured scenesCatching tears on sorrowful faces. Where have those yearsI have known your sweet soul gone?Traces of your nimble fingersLie in village gardensHealth and vigour in their growthYour spirit rooted thereFreely shared with loveSeeding future wilderness' How many nurtured childrenWith anxious parentsYou sweetly imbued With kindness and confidence I am honoured to have known youYour passing bringing awarenessDelicate tracing of time and the lessonTo live, love and be thankfulFor every dawn on each day ofNew hope.
— seabhac, Dec 05, 2009

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Seren

Seren

16 years 6 months ago

Dear Seabhac

Heart wrenching poem hun ... just made a puddle of me ... beautifully done ... will answer your PM later when its quiet I am having trouble hearing myself think here tonight lol love and hugs Jayne x x
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks Jayne

I was a bit of a puddle myself but writing this has helped the healing Seabhac
Kailashana

Kailashana

16 years 6 months ago

Truly love poem. I hope you

Truly love poem. I hope you read it for the eulogy. My condolences. ~A "...when it agrees with reason and it will benefit one and all, then accept it and live by it." ~ Buddha
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 6 months ago

Thanks Anna

For your empathy and consideration. I will send the family a copy As you get older death comes nearer in the loss of your friends and your understanding of how death plays such a large part in life. Seabhac
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ziggy

16 years 6 months ago

hellooooo

hi there very nicely put images here which i found easy to see through your words fav line is " winter light teased wanly through coloured scenes " beautiful delicate trac(e)ing of time ............zigs
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 6 months ago

Hi Ziggy

Thanks for the visit and kind words. Best Wishes Seabhac
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gcool06

16 years 6 months ago

a sad poem...

with a hope-full ending. a fitting remembrance. thank you for sharing!
seabhac

seabhac

16 years 6 months ago

Hi there

Thank you for comming by and taking the time to comment. Best Wishes Seabhac