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Dec 05, 2009
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Donatella
Today I sat in vaulted churchQuaint and countrified in its rural wayWinter light teased wanlyThrough coloured scenesCatching tears on sorrowful faces. Where have those yearsI have known your sweet soul gone?Traces of your nimble fingersLie in village gardensHealth and vigour in their growthYour spirit rooted thereFreely shared with loveSeeding future wilderness' How many nurtured childrenWith anxious parentsYou sweetly imbued With kindness and confidence I am honoured to have known youYour passing bringing awarenessDelicate tracing of time and the lessonTo live, love and be thankfulFor every dawn on each day ofNew hope.
— seabhac, Dec 05, 2009
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Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Seabhac
seabhac
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks Jayne
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Truly love poem. I hope you
seabhac
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks Anna
RobertKnott
16 years 6 months ago
beautifully expressed
seabhac
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks you Robert
ziggy
16 years 6 months ago
hellooooo
seabhac
16 years 6 months ago
Hi Ziggy
gcool06
16 years 6 months ago
a sad poem...
seabhac
16 years 6 months ago
Hi there