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Dec 05, 2009
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Dingo Tracks
Having seen an endless hall
doors either side,
I wandered,
a white dingo
joined me
at magnolia runners end
my blood turned to take flight
his fangs crept to
a grimace
as he leaps
Now,
with paws on my shoulders
he laps
from the river coursing
my face
I release what I thought
were exclamations
of a beginning
enlightenment
and brush to cross the fire
searing within my flesh
his mouth took my hand
leading me to the first
of many doors
this is my totem
the path I shall follow
this is just the beginning
my hand rests in destiny's
soft white coat
stilled
— Seren, Dec 05, 2009
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bjp
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Jayne-Chloe,
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Brian
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Theo
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
What can I say, Jayne? The
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest Mum
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
What a wonderful story to
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks for that its a
Kailashana
16 years 6 months ago
Yum! Nothing like 2 a.m.
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
the fudge is all gone …
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
White Dogs...
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dearest Gee
Geezer
16 years 6 months ago
Dingo Tracks...
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Done and Doner … I will
Nordic cloud
16 years 6 months ago
now have a pen that dances in its freedom
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Dear Ann
R.M.Shanmugam
16 years 6 months ago
a good one. shan
Seren
16 years 6 months ago
Thanks Shan I am glad you